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Commission - Galeon Dream by KatyAmlie Commission - Galeon Dream by KatyAmlie
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First off, I just wanna say that I appreciate the fact that you constantly ask for decries and make room for improvement. Not a lot of people take criticism so well (least in America).

To the main subject! I think you did the whole catch of the scenery very well. You have a man on a flying boat in the sky, while he flies his kite. I see a bit of a metaphor or symbolism with the star-shaped kite in the sky. Then there's a small patch of land at the very bottom left corner to confirm that he is, in fact, flying through the air. I truly love the whole picture.

If I look really hard for any improvement you can work on, it would probably be the clouds. They look like giant iceburges to me so maybe next time you paint clouds try making them look more fluffy somehow. It's probably nothing, but I really am doing my best to help you improve because this is truly an amazing piece.
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Andruril93 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Intriguing!  I really like it.
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:icongaston3-italia:
Gaston3-italia Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Molto bello. Congratulations!
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BorisFedorov Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Well it looks like he's having a good time sailing in the air.
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:iconchris-the-sword:
chris-the-sword Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
wow, a nice and abstract piece, i liked it!
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Ilovefallingcows25 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2015  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Awesome
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:iconvyel:
Vyel Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice work on the ship, the man, and the scenery, they are spot on :)
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:iconbear48:
bear48 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015  Professional
sweet job
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:iconvirnagray:
virnagray Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it:)
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Kagehahen Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014
How wonderfully whimsical - it has that hazy dream light quality - nothing heavy - the water and sky are perfectly calm and gives that drifting feeling.  Very nicely done.
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Yagamiseven Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014
Very nice!
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:iconcalikal:
calikal Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
pretty awesome!!!Clap :D (Big Grin) 
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CpointSpoint Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very cool idea!
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:icontylerp1991:
tylerp1991 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
wow
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SimbaGurl Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014
Wow !
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:iconthetinfoilrat:
TheTinfoilRat Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
This is lovely. ^^
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:icontiggersprings:
tiggersprings Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Fabulous.
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TimMcJimFromPL Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2014
Amazing.
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RoseJoker Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This looks fantastic ! <3
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:iconcarlsbergensis:
Carlsbergensis Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
This is absolutely fantastic. I am very impressed with the dream and also with your artistic interpretation. My compliments to you. May I also take this opportunity to wish you all the very best for Christmas.
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Roboinc Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Now THAT, i love. Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaabsolutely.
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nimfa36 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Fantastic
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MaximumDoodie Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Neat ouo
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